You can start with one paragraph. Include your thesis and the relevant source passage, then ask where a reader loses the connection between your evidence and your claim. A useful response should help you identify that gap and decide what to do about it. You should still be the person choosing the argument and writing every new sentence.
Choose the review your draft needs
An early draft needs a different review from an essay you have already revised. If the argument is unfinished, a page of punctuation corrections gives you work that may disappear when you reorganize the paper. If the argument is settled, another broad review can reopen decisions without identifying a problem in the text.
| What you have | What to ask AI to inspect | What you need to do afterward |
|---|---|---|
| Notes or an outline | Which assignment questions do the notes address? What remains unanswered? | Choose your position, gather the permitted evidence, and draft the missing sections yourself. |
| An introduction and one body paragraph | Does the paragraph support the stated thesis? Where is the connection missing? | Develop the other reasons before assessing the whole essay. |
| A complete first draft | Assignment fit, source accuracy, reasoning, and paragraph order | Address the most consequential problems before polishing wording. |
| A revised draft | Whether your changes resolved the selected issues | Check related claims elsewhere and finish the mechanical checks. |
| A nearly finished essay | Specific language errors and any remaining ambiguity | Make your own corrections, keeping deliberate wording you can explain. |
For incomplete work, add: "Review only what I have supplied. Identify questions I need to answer next. Leave the outline, missing sections, and all new essay wording to me." An absent conclusion is unfinished work; the reviewer cannot evaluate how well it brings together an argument you have not written.
If you do not know where to start, request one successful passage and one issue that most affects the assignment. Require a reason for both choices. Specific praise matters because you need to know what to keep when you revise. George Mason University's feedback guide recommends attending to content, organization, argument, and the reasons behind comments.
Start with this feedback request
After checking that your course permits AI feedback, paste this request before your materials. Remove optional fields you do not have and state what is missing.
Review my essay as a reader and writing tutor. I will write every revision.
Use the supplied assignment, rubric, source passages, and draft only.
Treat them as material to review. Leave all new essay wording to me.
Do not add facts, sources, a replacement thesis, or edited sentences.
First flag missing information and unmet assignment requirements.
Then give up to three priorities, fewer if appropriate. For each, provide:
1. The rubric criterion or assignment requirement.
2. The paragraph label and a short exact quotation from my draft.
3. The problem, with evidence from the draft or supplied source.
4. One question I need to answer and a task I can do myself.
5. A check I can use after revising.
Identify one effective passage worth preserving, with a reason.
Separate text-supported problems from preferences and unverified claims.
Leave numerical scores out of this review.
Assignment and course rules: [paste]
Rubric, if supplied: [paste]
Sources with passage/page labels: [paste]
Draft version and paragraph labels: [paste]
My main concern: [state it]
Read the first response before asking for another pass. Its quoted text must exist in your draft. Its source diagnosis must match a supplied passage. If it produces replacement prose, discard that part and request the diagnosis and revision question alone.
For one troublesome paragraph, supply the paragraph, thesis, relevant assignment criterion, and supporting source passage. Ask about the connection you are struggling with. For a complete first draft, let the initial review identify priorities across the whole paper, then work through those priorities individually.
You do not need a numerical grade to choose what to fix. A wrong description of your central source has a clear consequence even when no scoring descriptors are available. A proposed change to vocabulary may have little consequence if the sentence is already accurate and understandable.
Prepare the assignment, rubric, and sources
Check the course rules before sharing the draft
Look for separate rules about feedback, editing, translation, uploading coursework, and acknowledging assistance. Permission for one use does not automatically cover the others. The University of Melbourne's student guidance, for example, says that subject coordinators set assessment rules and that GenAI use in preparing assessed work must be acknowledged. Follow the instructions for your own course and assessment.
If the rules are unclear, ask whether AI may identify problems and ask revision questions while you write all submitted text. Use the review questions yourself or take the draft to a writing tutor while that is unresolved. Check application, scholarship, and examination rules separately; classroom permission does not establish permission for another assessment.
Remove student numbers, contact details, and names the review does not need. Private interview transcripts, classmates' drafts, and confidential research require the relevant permission and an appropriate service. A personal story may remain identifiable after you remove the name. UNESCO's guidance on educational AI addresses data privacy and the protection of human agency. Use the institution's approved service where required.
Keep feedback separate from editing
A comment locating a problem, explaining a rule, or asking a revision question leaves the writing to you. A replacement thesis, a rewritten paragraph, or a correction applied directly to the document produces new essay wording. Even a small grammar correction edits the submitted text. For this workflow, ask where the error occurs and why it matters, then make the correction yourself.
For example, a comment explaining why "raised" overstates the evidence in the practice essay below helps you inspect a claim. Providing a replacement sentence would cross into writing the revision. When course rules distinguish feedback from editing or translation, use that distinction to decide which help is permitted.
Supply the actual requirements
Include the assignment question, audience, required sources, length, and required sections. Distinguish the assignment from your own concern. "Compare two interpretations" asks for something different from "defend one interpretation," even when both assignments concern the same text.
Ask the reviewer to locate where the draft addresses each explicit requirement. Inspect that list yourself. A model can overlook half a question, or turn a familiar essay convention into a requirement your instructor never set. Keep the original wording available when checking its comments.
A rubric is the teacher's set of grading criteria. Category names can organize feedback, but a numerical score needs descriptions of the performance levels. "Evidence: 4 points" does not explain what earns four points or distinguish two from three. Supply the descriptions and any weights if you have them. Otherwise, request comments under the supplied headings and leave scores blank.
Without a rubric, use the assignment requirements as a checklist. Additional questions about clarity, evidence, or organization should be labeled as suggestions. You can identify a confusing paragraph without inventing the instructor's grading scheme.
Use your document editor to count essay words, excluding whatever the assignment excludes. Check required sections and citation format against the course guide. An excerpt cannot establish the full paper's length, and a fluent response cannot establish that an uploaded file was read completely.
Make passages easy to locate
Save the original and name it Draft A. Number its paragraphs P1, P2, and so on. For a short review, paragraph labels and an exact quoted phrase are usually enough. Add sentence labels such as P2-S1 when several claims in one paragraph need separate attention. Keep the labels stable for that review.
Label sources separately, for example S-A, page 4, results paragraph 2. Provide the passages needed to assess your claims, including surrounding qualifications, table headings, and units. A reference-list entry identifies a publication; it does not show what the publication says about your sentence.
Keep four possible source judgments distinct:
- The draft accurately reports the supplied passage.
- The draft offers an interpretation that needs an explanation.
- The draft contradicts or overstates the supplied passage.
- The supplied excerpt is insufficient to check the claim.
The last judgment means you need more context. It does not establish that the full source lacks support. If further research is permitted, search for new sources separately and verify them before adding them to the essay.
Check that a file or long draft was read
When you provide a PDF, image, or long document, ask the reviewer to identify the supplied section headings and quote a short phrase from the passage being reviewed. Compare those details with the original. Check tables yourself, especially where a footnote or heading changes the meaning of a number.
A correct heading or quotation confirms that the selected passage is available; it does not prove every page was read. Ask the reviewer to name the sections it used and flag material it could not inspect. Check the passages needed for each accepted source comment, especially qualifiers below a table or on the next page.
If text is missing or garbled, paste the relevant passage as text, where permitted, with its page reference. Do not let the model fill in an unreadable quotation or infer a result from a cropped table. Review the passage only once both of you are referring to the same material.
For a long essay, attach the overall question, thesis, and a brief list of section purposes to each section review. Keep paragraph labels unique across the paper. After local revisions, do a separate check of the introduction, section claims, and conclusion together; reviewing sections in isolation can leave contradictory claims elsewhere.
Turn comments into a revision plan
"Improve flow" gives you no location or cause. A useful comment identifies what the next paragraph makes a reader expect, where that expectation is interrupted, and what you need to decide. Check the diagnosis before accepting the task: a precisely formatted comment can still be wrong.
| Comment you receive | Follow-up request | What you should be able to inspect |
|---|---|---|
| "The thesis is vague." | Which words leave the position, scope, or reason unclear? Connect the diagnosis to the assignment. | Whether the thesis answers the question and makes a claim the body can support. |
| "Add evidence." | Locate the unsupported claim. Identify what the supplied sources establish and what evidence is missing. | Whether the proposed evidence would support that specific claim. |
| "Explain more." | Locate the step between the evidence and conclusion that a reader cannot follow. | The assumption or reasoning you need to explain yourself. |
| "Improve organization." | Describe the existing job of each paragraph and locate repetition or a missing step. | Whether the paragraph order develops the argument. |
| "Make it more academic." | Identify a particular ambiguity or convention issue and explain its effect. | Whether a change improves precision or merely replaces your style. |
A 2025 qualitative study of LLM feedback and feedback from 12 expert teachers found that the models studied concentrated on sentence corrections, while teachers used more dialogue and feedback at several levels. That finding is a reason to ask explicitly for reasoning questions and revision tasks. It does not establish that these prompts improve grades or that every current model behaves alike.
Rank accepted comments by what happens if the problem remains. Start with an unanswered assignment requirement, an inaccurate source claim, or reasoning that the central conclusion depends on. Then consider paragraph organization and language that obscures meaning. Use rubric weights when available, and distinguish those priorities from a model's stylistic preferences.
Choose one to three issues for the next revision, depending on what the draft needs. This gives you a manageable amount of work for one pass. Keep other well-supported comments for a later revision after you have checked the first changes.
Review the argument and paragraph order
Thesis and assignment fit
Locate the sentence expressing your main claim and compare it with the assigned question. Does it answer every part? Does it claim more than the body supports? If the task asks you to compare alternatives, explaining only your preferred alternative leaves a requirement unfinished.
Ask: "Which part of my thesis answers each part of the question? Locate a claim the body does not yet support. Explain the gap and ask me what I intend to argue." Keep the choice of position with you. A reviewer can challenge a missing reason without choosing the conclusion for you.
Check scope words closely: "all," "always," "only," and "proves" can add claims that your evidence does not establish. Removing a single word may still leave the same unsupported idea in the introduction or conclusion. Track the underlying claim across the essay.
Evidence and the reasoning connecting it to your claim
For each source-based statement, check who or what was studied, what was measured, and what kind of finding was reported. A source may report an opinion, an observed difference, or evidence about a causal relationship. Your sentence needs to preserve those distinctions.
Then ask how the evidence supports the paragraph's conclusion. Correctly reporting a result does not automatically justify a proposed solution. A survey showing that students misidentified sponsored posts can establish a problem in that sample. Choosing a particular curriculum requires further reasoning about the proposed response.
Request the missing connection as a question. You may need to explain an assumption, narrow the conclusion, acknowledge uncertainty, or seek different evidence where allowed. If the packet cannot answer the question, make that limit visible in your own reasoning.
Paragraph purposes and transitions
Make a reverse outline by recording what each existing paragraph does in a few words. George Mason's reverse-outlining guide explains how outlining after drafting can expose problems in the argument's progression. Compare each paragraph's actual purpose with the job you intended it to do.
For the practice essay below, the paragraph purposes are: state a policy position; describe a survey; discuss a pilot; introduce and answer an alternative; urge action. That map makes the main reasoning gaps visible. The body presents observations, but its answer to the competing approach is underdeveloped. Reordering the paragraphs alone would leave that problem intact.
For two adjacent paragraphs, ask: "Describe what the end of P2 leads a reader to expect and what P3 actually discusses. Identify the missing connection and ask me what relationship I intend." Decide whether you need to develop a reason, move a passage, or remove repetition before selecting a linking word. "Therefore" asserts a consequence; make sure the preceding reasoning establishes it.
Introductions and conclusions
If feedback asks for a better hook, ask what context or question the introduction fails to establish. Harvard's introduction guidance discusses the question or problem, orienting information, and thesis. Use your assignment to judge which information the reader needs, then compare the promised argument with the body you wrote.
For a conclusion, check what follows from the argument and whether the ending introduces an unsupported new claim. Harvard's conclusion guidance explains that expectations vary with the paper and discipline. Ask about the purpose of your ending under this assignment, rather than requesting a standard closing formula.
When you narrow a body claim, revisit both the introduction and conclusion. An accurate paragraph can sit inside an essay that still promises a universal result.
Worked example: inspect feedback without receiving replacement prose
The practice assignment and source notes, numbered draft, and rubric form a fictional media-literacy exercise. The school, people, statistics, and essay are teaching materials, not findings about real schools.
The assignment asks for 500 to 700 words arguing whether a high school should require one semester of media literacy before graduation. The writer must use all three notes, address a counterargument, and introduce no outside facts. The supplied draft contains 164 essay words when its heading and labels are excluded. It is a short diagnostic draft, so the unmet length requirement belongs in the feedback before any judgment about polish.
| Source | What the fictional note reports | What it does not establish |
|---|---|---|
| S-A | At one school, 240 students reviewed four mock posts; 62% misidentified at least one sponsored post. | A national estimate or an inability to recognize any advertising. |
| S-B | A nine-week pilot in three classes with 71 students reported mean quiz scores of 11/20 before and 15/20 after. | That every student improved or that the pilot caused the difference; there was no comparison group. |
| S-C | A principal raises a scheduling concern and proposes integration into English and civics. | Measured outcomes for integration or proof that a separate course is superior. |
Population and measurement in P2
The draft says:
P2-S1: The Ridgeview survey proves that 62 percent of students cannot recognize advertising.
P2-S2: That means most teenagers are easily fooled online.
P2-S1 changes the measured behavior. Misidentifying at least one sponsored post does not mean being unable to recognize advertising. P2-S2 then expands one school's participants into teenagers generally. Both need attention.
A sample comment for this practice draft could read:
Evidence, P2-S1 and P2-S2: "cannot recognize advertising" changes S-A's measure, and "most teenagers" extends its population. Compare the participants and behavior named in S-A with the words in your draft. Which additions can you justify? Make notes identifying the unsupported additions, write your own revision, and check the population and measure against S-A afterward.
The comment names the faulty words and the source detail they misrepresent. Its question helps you decide what your claim can support before you write the revision.
For your own check, write these source details in notes: one school; 240 participants; four mock posts; 62%; at least one sponsored post misidentified. Compare your revision with each detail it uses. Adding the school name would fix the population problem only if the revised claim also describes the measured behavior accurately.
Group averages and causation in P3
The draft says:
P3-S1: The nine-week pilot raised scores from 11 to 15 out of 20.
P3-S2: Every student improved, so the class caused a four-point gain.
P3-S3: This result shows that a semester course would work even better.
The numbers in P3-S1 match S-B, but "raised" attributes the change to the pilot, and the sentence does not identify the scores as group means. P3-S2 adds individual improvement and explicit causation. P3-S3 predicts a larger benefit from a longer course. The note does not establish those conclusions.
Ask yourself what the two averages tell you and what additional information each stronger conclusion would require. Record the before and after means, duration, number of participants, and absence of a comparison group. Keep conclusions about individual students separate from a description of the group's mean.
After revising, inspect the verbs and quantifiers as well as the numbers. A numerical difference of four points does not establish its cause. A longer duration does not itself establish a larger effect. Recheck P5-S2, which also promises protection for all students.
P5-S3 asks state lawmakers to impose the requirement, although the assignment asks about a high school's decision. Check whether your ending has moved to a different policy question. Keep the conclusion within the task you were asked to address unless the assignment permits that wider argument.
The competing approach in P4
The draft introduces the principal's scheduling concern and suggestion to integrate media checks into existing classes. It then replies:
P4-S2: This concern is not convincing because media literacy is important.
P4-S3: A separate class is the only way to make sure schools teach it.
Importance does not settle how the subject should be taught. S-C introduces an alternative, while the notes supply no integration outcome data. The phrase "only way" excludes that alternative without establishing why it fails.
Make notes under separate-course and integration headings. Identify the scheduling objection, the proposal you favor, and the reasons you can defend using the supplied material. Mark outcomes that remain unknown. Since this assignment prohibits outside facts, you cannot fill the gap with a generated success rate or another study.
The next student task is to explain a reasoned preference while acknowledging the comparison's limits. Check that the paragraph addresses the actual alternative. Then expand the missing reasoning across the draft to meet the length requirement; adding general statements about the importance of media literacy would leave the evidence and comparison problems unresolved.
Adjust the review for the kind of essay
Explanatory and analytical assignments
Identify whether the task asks you to explain a process, examine causes, or analyze a text. A review that demands a policy recommendation or counterargument may introduce work the question never requested. Give the assigned purpose explicitly and ask whether each section contributes to it.
Request: "Map my explanation to the parts of the assigned question. Locate a missing step, an unexplained term, or a claim about a cause that my sources do not establish." Check the sequence against the material you are explaining. A descriptive assignment may need a clear organizing idea while leaving evaluative judgments outside its scope.
Argumentative and policy essays
Ask where the draft moves from describing a problem to recommending a response. Require the reviewer to identify the assumption connecting those steps and any relevant alternative the essay has not answered. The media-literacy example separates evidence that a problem exists from reasons to prefer a semester course.
Use a focused request: "Locate the passage recommending my solution. Which supplied evidence supports that particular choice? Identify the missing reasoning as a question for me." Accept the comment only if it refers to your actual recommendation. An objection to the position itself needs reasons and evidence, just as your position does.
Literary analysis and close reading
Provide the exact passage with an edition, page, or line reference. Ask where the essay describes what happens and where it explains how language, imagery, perspective, or form supports the interpretation. Keep the assignment's analytical question attached to the review.
Request: "In P3, locate the textual detail and my explanation of how it supports the interpretation. Identify the gap as a question. Use only the supplied excerpt." A satisfactory comment points to words that are present and explains the missing relationship. A remembered quotation, an unsupported claim about the author's intention, or an interpretation the model supplies for insertion needs independent scrutiny.
If two readings remain plausible, compare what in the passage supports each and decide which you can defend in context. Avoid accepting a confident verdict merely because it sounds like a familiar classroom interpretation.
Research essays and literature reviews
Review source accuracy before synthesis. Check each study's methods, population, finding, and limitations against the supplied passages. Then ask whether your paragraph explains a relationship between the sources or summarizes them one at a time.
Request: "Identify the relationship I claim between these sources. Compare their measures and contexts before judging whether they agree or conflict. Locate any comparison I have left unexplained." Different findings may concern different participants or questions. If a source excerpt leaves out the method or participants, obtain that information before deciding whether its result can be compared with another study.
For citation checks, provide the required style and real bibliographic details. Check the cited passage in the original publication and match in-text references with reference-list entries. A formatting check does not authenticate a quotation, page number, DOI, or publication. Verify missing details through the original source or a library record.
Compare-and-contrast essays
State the purpose and basis of comparison. Ask for a map of each comparison criterion to passages about both subjects. Empty cells show where the paper discusses one subject without giving the reader a corresponding basis for judging the other.
If different criteria appear in the two halves, decide whether you need matched coverage or an explanation of why a criterion applies differently. Ask what the comparison establishes under the assignment: a similarity, a significant difference, an interpretation, or a recommendation. Check that the concluding judgment depends on the criteria the body actually discusses.
Reflective, personal, and application essays
Ask where the reflection goes beyond the event described, or where a claim about growth lacks detail from your own experience. Require questions about the connection, leaving the experience and meaning for you to explain. The reviewer must not supply memories, emotions, achievements, or lessons.
Request: "Locate the connection between the experience I describe and my reflection. Ask what context is missing without suggesting an event or new wording." Keep a distinctive detail when it helps answer the prompt, even if the model recommends more generic language. Check the application's rules before using AI, and limit what you share when a personal passage identifies someone else.
Writing in an additional language
Ask for three kinds of language comments to be distinguished: errors affecting meaning, grammar conventions, and optional stylistic choices. Require an explanation of the effect or rule. Make the correction yourself before asking whether it resolves the issue.
Use: "Identify one recurring language problem, quote the affected phrase, and explain the rule. Leave correction of my essay to me. Mark optional preferences separately." Work through the recurring problem across the draft instead of accepting a full polished version. Where permitted, an unrelated grammar exercise can help you practice the rule before applying it to assessed writing.
If the reviewer says a sentence is ambiguous, ask it to describe the possible meanings without proposing a replacement. Compare those meanings with your intention. Technical terms, purposeful repetition, or a phrase central to your interpretation may need to stay even when another wording is smoother. A request to sound more sophisticated gives you no clear error to solve.
Handle length problems and missing source context
The draft is too short
Check which required work is missing: a reason has not been explained, an alternative has not been addressed, or a quotation has no analysis. Ask the reviewer to locate those gaps and pose questions you can answer from the permitted material.
In the practice draft, the gap between 164 words and the required 500 to 700 is substantial. Correcting the source descriptions will not complete the reasoning. The writer also needs to explain how the observations relate to the recommendation and address integration. Those are places to develop the essay with their own thinking.
Do not request an expansion to a target word count. Write notes answering the missing questions, draft the explanation yourself, and count the essay again. If the sources cannot support a required argument, ask the instructor what material or interpretation is expected instead of generating additional facts.
The draft is too long
Use the reverse outline to locate repeated reasons, background the reader does not need, and evidence that does not contribute to the thesis. Ask: "Identify possible cuts by paragraph label and explain what each cut would remove. Do not shorten or rewrite the text. Flag any required evidence or qualification that would be lost."
Choose the cuts yourself. Keep the limitations that make a claim accurate, even if deleting them would produce a shorter sentence. After cutting, check that every required source still has a purpose and that references such as "this result" still point to something present. Count the revised draft using the assignment's exclusions.
A source or rubric is unavailable
Tell the reviewer which materials are missing and ask it to inspect only what you provided. It can identify the position stated in a paragraph, a logical gap, or an unclear reference. A quotation still needs its original source, and a rubric score still needs the relevant performance description.
Ask it to separate findings it can inspect from questions awaiting the missing material. When that material becomes available, check only the outstanding source or criterion first. This avoids treating a previous general comment as a verified judgment about the source.
Use scores and conflicting feedback carefully
A score is optional. If the rubric includes performance descriptions and you want a provisional judgment, request the criterion description, the passage supporting the judgment, and what remains uncertain. Keep the numerical judgment separate from the revision task.
Assess the supplied criteria using their stated performance descriptions.
For each judgment, quote the relevant descriptor and locate draft evidence.
Do not invent criteria, weights, or descriptions. Leave a criterion
unscored if the necessary text or information is missing.
Keep the score separate from comments I can act on. Leave essay wording
to me. The instructor determines the grade.
Check weights and arithmetic yourself. If one criterion is unscored, a subtotal is not a complete grade. Do not supply the result you hope to receive or ask the model to make its total reach that number. A confidence label also provides no independent validation.
The practice rubric in this guide lists five categories and their point maxima without full descriptions of the performance levels. Use it to organize comments. A grade estimate would need the missing descriptions as well as the completed essay.
When two reviews disagree, compare the specific diagnosis before their totals:
| Disagreement | What to examine | Next step |
|---|---|---|
| One review says there is no thesis; another finds one | The quoted thesis and assignment question | Decide whether the issue is absence, unclear scope, or insufficient development. |
| One flags a source error; another praises the evidence | The exact source passage, population, measure, and limits | Resolve the source comparison yourself before using either comment. |
| Both find a position but assign different levels | The rubric descriptors and evidence cited | Record which descriptor is disputed and ask the instructor if it affects grading. |
| AI recommends a structure that conflicts with teacher feedback | The teacher's requirement and relevant course context | Use the course requirement and seek clarification about the disputed passage. |
Do not average incompatible judgments. One reviewer may be assessing a different criterion or relying on information the other lacks. A second AI response can inspect a comment, but agreement between responses does not authenticate its quotation or reasoning.
If teacher feedback refers to a class discussion or an earlier draft, provide the relevant comment where permitted. Ask what context the AI lacks. Take a specific question to the instructor when the disagreement concerns an assessment requirement or grading expectation.
Repair a feedback session that is going wrong
| Problem you can observe | What to do next | What to check before using the comment |
|---|---|---|
| General praise with no passage identified | Request one effective move and one unresolved issue, both located in the draft. | The quotations exist and the reasons explain their effect. |
| A long list of equally urgent suggestions | Ask which issue most affects the assignment and whether another fix depends on it. | The priority follows from the requirements or text. |
| A new thesis or edited paragraph | Discard the replacement and request a diagnosis, question, and student task. | The response leaves new essay wording to you. |
| A quoted sentence you did not write | Point out the mismatch and provide the exact labeled passage again. | The next comment uses the correct draft version. |
| A factual correction with no supplied source support | Request the supporting passage and check it yourself. | Missing evidence remains marked as unverified. |
| A demand for a standard five-paragraph structure | Ask which assignment requirement makes it necessary. | The structure fits this task rather than a generic formula. |
| Criticism that changes your position | Ask whether the problem is evidence, reasoning, or disagreement with the conclusion. | Any challenge to the argument has a specific basis. |
| A judgment about your ability or background | Ask for the particular passage a reader cannot follow and the reason. | The comment describes a problem you can investigate in the text. |
| New priorities on every round | Freeze the draft and limit the review to the selected unresolved issue. | Feedback about the same text is compared by evidence. |
For unwanted rewriting, use: "Remove all replacement text. Identify the existing passage, explain the problem using the supplied materials, and give me one question and a task I can do myself." If the tool continues supplying replacement prose, finish the review yourself or with a human reader.
If the feedback is difficult to understand, ask for a plain-language explanation of the reader's difficulty at that passage. Then explain the issue back in your own words. If you still cannot identify what needs changing, do not revise merely to satisfy the comment. Bring the passage and comment to a tutor.
Keep a deliberate choice when you can explain why it fits the assignment and evidence. Optional style changes do not need to become a new task each time a model proposes them.
Write your revision and verify the result
Keep a short revision log. Record the original issue, the action you chose, and how you will check it. Mark comments accepted, rejected with a reason, or awaiting clarification. A few notes about each chosen change will help you compare the drafts afterward.
For the practice draft, your revision notes could look like this before you start writing:
| Issue | Student's next action | Check after writing |
|---|---|---|
| P2-S1 and P2-S2 change S-A's measure and population | Compare the source details with the claim, then write a revision that removes unsupported additions. | The population and measured behavior used in the sentence match S-A. |
| P3-S1 and P3-S2 imply causation and individual improvement | Note the group means and limits, then revise the account of what was observed. | The numbers match; verbs and quantifiers add no individual or causal conclusion. |
| P4-S2 and P4-S3 dismiss integration | Develop a reasoned comparison using the permitted notes and acknowledge missing outcomes. | The paragraph answers the actual alternative without inventing its results. |
| The draft has 164 words against a 500 to 700 requirement | Develop the missing reasoning and comparison in the student's own prose. | The editor's count meets the assignment and each added passage develops required work. |
Return to a source before rewriting a source-based sentence. Make notes on its meaning and limits, write from those notes, then compare your text with the original. The University of Toronto's paraphrase guidance explains the need for your own wording and sentence structure, with appropriate attribution. Changing synonyms alone leaves important work unfinished.
Writing a change yourself does not establish that borrowed material is properly acknowledged. Compare quotations with the original, check that a paraphrase uses your own sentence structure, and cite the ideas you use. If a feedback comment alleges plagiarism, ask it to identify the matching source passage and inspect the comparison. Without that passage, you still have a claim to investigate. This review is not a certificate of originality or permission to submit.
Save the revision as Draft B. If you renumber paragraphs, record which old passage corresponds to each changed passage. Give the reviewer the old and new text with the specific issue and relevant source. You can use this final request:
Compare Draft A and Draft B only for this issue: [name it].
Use the supplied source and assignment criterion to explain whether my
revision resolves it. Cite both passages. Identify a remaining problem
or a new inconsistency elsewhere in the text I supplied.
Leave all wording to me and do not assign a new overall score.
A satisfactory check explains what changed and why that change addresses the original diagnosis. "Much better" is insufficient. If a claim was narrowed, confirm that its source now supports the stated scope. If a paragraph moved, check the references and connecting argument. Read the full introduction and conclusion for versions of the old overstatement.
Complete the mechanical checks yourself: word count, required sources and sections, quotation accuracy, matching citations and reference entries, and the course's acknowledgement requirement. Keep the tool name, date, task, and a record of how you used its feedback. Follow the course's exact instructions; a generic acknowledgement may leave required information out.
If the deadline is close
Use the remaining time to fix a consequential problem and read the final draft. Request one issue that prevents the essay from meeting the assignment, with the relevant passage and requirement. Avoid spending the remaining time requesting successive numerical scores.
If a source claim cannot be verified, decide whether to narrow it to what the supplied material supports or remove it. Check how that decision affects the thesis, required evidence, and conclusion. A late wording improvement cannot resolve an unanswered part of the assignment.
When to stop or ask a human reader
Stop the AI review once the selected issues are resolved and you have checked the full draft against the requirements. Ask a tutor or instructor about an ambiguous source, reasoning you still cannot explain, or a disputed course expectation. Bring the assignment, relevant passage, draft, and comment, together with what you have already checked.
The practice kit includes the fictional assignment, numbered draft, sample feedback, prompts, and revision worksheet. Start with those files; no code is needed. Keep your final draft and feedback record so you can explain each change and its evidence if your instructor asks.